时间飞鸟 发表于 2013-3-27 14:37:35

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东区政府办 发表于 2015-6-12 10:03:08

发现了自己的问题                                                                     

欧阳永恒 发表于 2015-6-22 23:19:07

公文写作很讲究,自己刚刚入行,很多东西不会,这种文章很好,有实例,值得我学习。

sys513527 发表于 2017-3-19 21:56:32


      3、任意生造主题词不在中共中央

猫眼看文 发表于 2017-4-4 10:13:50

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color: rgb(62, 62, 62); text-transform: none; text-indent: 0px; letter-spacing: normal; word-spacing: 0px; float: right; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; widows: 1; background-color: rgb(254, 254, 254); -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;"><section style="margin: 0.17em 0px 0px 0.57em; padding: 0px; width: 0.33em; height: 0.33em; color: rgb(0, 133, 208); word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(208, 238, 255);"></section><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; width: 0.5em; height: 0.5em; color: rgb(0, 133, 208); word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(208, 238, 255);"></section></section><section style="font: 16px/25.6px 微软雅黑; margin: 0px 0px -1em; padding: 10px 0px; color: rgb(0, 133, 208); text-transform: none; text-indent: 0px; letter-spacing: normal; word-spacing: 0px; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; widows: 1; background-color: rgb(208, 238, 255); -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px currentColor; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 15px; text-align: center; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-align: left; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">  不管您是经常写材料的,还是偶尔写一下材料,下面8种错误要尽量避免和克服:</span></p><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;" data-custom="rgb(204, 164, 227)" data-color="rgb(204, 164, 227)" data-id="85891" data-tools="135编辑器"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(153, 103, 103); display: inline-block; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" data-bgless="lighten"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 8px 8px 0px 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 6px 20px; color: rgb(78, 32, 104); word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(204, 164, 227);"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size: 18px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">定位不准</span></strong></p></section></section></section><section style="border-color: rgb(204, 164, 227) rgb(182, 182, 182) rgb(204, 164, 227) rgb(204, 164, 227); margin: -20px 0px 0px; padding: 40px 20px 20px; border-right-width: 1px; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-right-style: solid; border-bottom-style: solid; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(252, 252, 252);"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-align: left; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">  这是事先对材料的背景、需求、重点,以及场合、对象、身份没有搞清楚的缘故。凡有此毛病的,下的功夫越大,有可能离主题就会越远,最后的结果无疑是推倒重来。</span></p></section></section></section><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;" data-role="paragraph"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p></section><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;" data-custom="rgb(204, 164, 227)" data-color="rgb(204, 164, 227)" data-id="85891" data-tools="135编辑器"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(153, 103, 103); display: inline-block; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" data-bgless="lighten"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 8px 8px 0px 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 6px 20px; color: rgb(78, 32, 104); word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(204, 164, 227);"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size: 18px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">框架失调</span></strong></p></section></section></section><section style="border-color: rgb(204, 164, 227) rgb(182, 182, 182) rgb(204, 164, 227) rgb(204, 164, 227); margin: -20px 0px 0px; padding: 40px 20px 20px; border-right-width: 1px; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-right-style: solid; border-bottom-style: solid; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(252, 252, 252);"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-align: left; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">  要是总体布局不合理,文章几大部分高低不同、显然不在同一层次上。有的虽然几大部分可以,但在每一部分里面存在同样的毛病。这种文章成稿后,必然会导致内容上大调整,其难度不小于推倒重来。</span></p></section></section></section><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;" data-custom="rgb(204, 164, 227)" data-color="rgb(204, 164, 227)" data-id="85891" data-tools="135编辑器"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(153, 103, 103); display: inline-block; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" data-bgless="lighten"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 8px 8px 0px 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 6px 20px; color: rgb(78, 32, 104); word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(204, 164, 227);"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size: 18px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">内容繁琐</span></strong></p></section></section></section><section style="border-color: rgb(204, 164, 227) rgb(182, 182, 182) rgb(204, 164, 227) rgb(204, 164, 227); margin: -20px 0px 0px; padding: 40px 20px 20px; border-right-width: 1px; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-right-style: solid; border-bottom-style: solid; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(252, 252, 252);"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-align: left; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">  同一个内容、同一个道理,翻来覆去地讲,缺少新意,含金量少。这就需要多做修繁就简的工作,同时要清楚材料并不是越长越好,也不是越短越好,说准说透最重要。</span></p></section></section></section><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;" data-role="paragraph"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p></section><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;" data-custom="rgb(204, 164, 227)" data-color="rgb(204, 164, 227)" data-id="85891" data-tools="135编辑器"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(153, 103, 103); display: inline-block; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" data-bgless="lighten"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 8px 8px 0px 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 6px 20px; color: rgb(78, 32, 104); word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(204, 164, 227);"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size: 18px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">文题不符</span></strong></p></section></section></section><section style="border-color: rgb(204, 164, 227) rgb(182, 182, 182) rgb(204, 164, 227) rgb(204, 164, 227); margin: -20px 0px 0px; padding: 40px 20px 20px; border-right-width: 1px; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-right-style: solid; border-bottom-style: solid; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(252, 252, 252);"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-align: left; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">  有的内容很好,但标题不能盖住内容;有的标题很明确,但是内容不能佐证和支撑标题。写作中,要始终围绕标题来写,即使标题要修改也要始终忠实于修改后的标题来阐述,否则就会两张皮。</span></p></section></section></section><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;" data-role="paragraph"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p></section><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;" data-custom="rgb(204, 164, 227)" data-color="rgb(204, 164, 227)" data-id="85891" data-tools="135编辑器"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(153, 103, 103); display: inline-block; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" data-bgless="lighten"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 8px 8px 0px 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 6px 20px; color: rgb(78, 32, 104); word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(204, 164, 227);"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size: 18px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">交叉重复</span></strong></p></section></section></section><section style="border-color: rgb(204, 164, 227) rgb(182, 182, 182) rgb(204, 164, 227) rgb(204, 164, 227); margin: -20px 0px 0px; padding: 40px 20px 20px; border-right-width: 1px; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-right-style: solid; border-bottom-style: solid; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(252, 252, 252);"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-align: left; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">  主要体现在综合性的材料上,一个内容佐证几个观点,放在这儿也行,放在哪儿也行,最后为了说清楚两边都放,就造成了这个问题,这在新手中十分普遍。这就需要写材料不能讲究面面俱到,要选准突破口和切入点,往深里挖。</span></p></section></section></section><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;" data-role="paragraph"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p></section><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;" data-custom="rgb(204, 164, 227)" data-color="rgb(204, 164, 227)" data-id="85891" data-tools="135编辑器"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(153, 103, 103); display: inline-block; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" data-bgless="lighten"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 8px 8px 0px 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 6px 20px; color: rgb(78, 32, 104); word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(204, 164, 227);"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size: 18px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">平铺直叙</span></strong></p></section></section></section><section style="border-color: rgb(204, 164, 227) rgb(182, 182, 182) rgb(204, 164, 227) rgb(204, 164, 227); margin: -20px 0px 0px; padding: 40px 20px 20px; border-right-width: 1px; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-right-style: solid; border-bottom-style: solid; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(252, 252, 252);"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-align: left; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">&nbsp;  要多用短句子,多几层转折。当然也不能为转而转,核心还要为主题和中心内容服务。</span></p></section></section></section><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;" data-role="paragraph"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p></section><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;" data-custom="rgb(204, 164, 227)" data-color="rgb(204, 164, 227)" data-id="85891" data-tools="135编辑器"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(153, 103, 103); display: inline-block; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" data-bgless="lighten"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 8px 8px 0px 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 6px 20px; color: rgb(78, 32, 104); word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(204, 164, 227);"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size: 18px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">比例失衡</span></strong></p></section></section></section><section style="border-color: rgb(204, 164, 227) rgb(182, 182, 182) rgb(204, 164, 227) rgb(204, 164, 227); margin: -20px 0px 0px; padding: 40px 20px 20px; border-right-width: 1px; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-right-style: solid; border-bottom-style: solid; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(252, 252, 252);"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-align: left; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">  一篇文章有的部分之间明显失衡。更有甚者,一部分五六页,一部分三两行,美其名曰详略得当,这实在是不为所取。</span></p><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p></section></section></section><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; text-align: left; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><br style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"></p><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;" data-custom="rgb(204, 164, 227)" data-color="rgb(204, 164, 227)" data-id="85891" data-tools="135编辑器"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(153, 103, 103); display: inline-block; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" data-bgless="lighten"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 8px 8px 0px 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box;"><section style="margin: 0px; padding: 6px 20px; color: rgb(78, 32, 104); word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; background-color: rgb(204, 164, 227);"><p style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; clear: both; white-space: normal; word-wrap: break-word !important; min-height: 1em; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><strong style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;"><span style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size: 18px; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box !important;">照抄照搬</span></strong></p></section></section></section><section style="border-color: rgb(204, 164, 227) rgb(182, 182, 182) rgb(204, 164, 227) rgb(204, 164, 227); margin: -20px 0px 0px; padding: 40px 20px 20px; border-right-width: 1px; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-right-style: solid; border-bottom-style: solid; word-wrap: break-word !important; max-width: 100%; box-sizing: border-box; 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从事文稿起草工作的同志都有一个共同的体会,每到岁末年初之时,往往是最忙碌、最紧张、最充实的季节。这个时候,各种材料任务特别多、特别急。面对这种情况,如何提高文稿写作效率呢?这里,我谈谈自己的四点体会。


一、模仿范文写作

模仿,可以说是我们提高写作效率的重要途径。但我们首先要正确认识到,模仿绝不同于抄袭,抄袭是照搬他人的智力成果,而模仿写作是仿佳文的写作手法、语言风格、借鉴材料的方式,等等。起草文稿时,特别是对一些未曾写过的材料,有时候自己冥思苦想半天,可能还想不出好的思路,迟迟无从下手,但参照一些范文,依葫芦画瓢,往往会取得意想不到的效果,这对初学写作者,效果更佳。如何模仿?可以从仿词、仿句开始,主要是模仿句式、改换词语,然后仿观点、仿篇章,如改换材料、改变主题、改变叙述方式等。记得2008年底,我刚到办公室从事文稿起草工作。有一次,科长要我起草一份公司领导在月度经济活动分析会上的讲话稿,我翻出公司2007年底经济活动分析会领导讲话稿,仿照这篇范文的观点,我结合当时的新形势新情况,运用新的素材支撑观点,在较短的时间里起草了领导讲话稿,收到了良好的效果。

二、利用现有资料

现有资料是指文稿起草者已掌握的有关文件、领导讲话、工作简报、会议材料、重要数据、名言警句等。岁末年初,各种材料虽多,但由于有些工作是相同的,有些道理是相通的,有些现有资料也就可以充分用起来。相比千方百计到处找素材,从“数据库”中直接调已有资料,写作效率要明显高很多。在工作中,我常常采取以下三种方式利用现有资料:一是直接引用。这常见于对名言、俗语、诗词、典故等资料的引用。恰当地“拿来”这些资料,可有效增强文稿的感染力和说服力。有一年,我在起草公司新年献词时,从自己的剪报资料中直接引用了“东风浩荡满眼春,万里征程催人急”这句话,为文章增色不少。二是嫁接改造。运用现有资料时,尤其注重精炼和贴切。所谓精炼,就是指现有资料只是为新文稿而服务,叙述事实论据时,要择要交代,把能证明新文稿观点的那部分拿过来就行了;所谓贴切,就是论据和论点相统一。使用已有资料时,必须根据新文稿的需要进行“压缩”“替换”“改造”。三是合并同类。起草文稿时,有时候会碰到这种情况,在几个现有资料中同时有一些可以用起来的素材,这个时候,我们就要善于对相关素材进行整理,分门别类进行梳理,归好类,去粗存精,保留重要部分,用好关键信息。

三、善于提前准备

在几年的工作中,我逐渐养成了一个习惯,“计划内的事情提前做,计划外的事情尽快做”,把这个习惯用到写材料上,也是很好的。特别是进入年底,材料任务很重,要提高文稿写作效率,提前准备显得尤为重要。那么,到底要从哪些方面做好准备呢?一是加强工作统筹。由于岁末年初常规性材料多,临时性任务杂,如果不注意加强统筹、分清轻重缓急,而是眉毛胡子一把抓,就容易打乱仗,直接影响写作效率。因此,每到11月份,我们就会研究制定文稿工作统筹一览表,做到制定计划不漏事,落实责任不含糊,明确进度不拖拉,以便高效有序推进各项工作。二是提前思考提纲。文稿起草主要包括搜集资料、确定主题、领会意图、拟定提纲、完成初稿、反复修改等6个步骤。如果我们把这项工作想在前、做在前,就可以把难事化易,将急事变缓,让效率提升,使效果增强。三是及早收集素材。起草各类文稿,既要注意大量掌握信息,解决文章内容问题,又要注意从材料堆里走出来,解决好观点提炼问题。为此,在平时,我们就要善于利用网络、报纸等工具,开始搜寻信息、占有材料、储备观点,实现从被动应付工作到主动适应要求,再到超前谋划工作的转变。争取主动,也就赢得了效率。

四、优化工作方式

提高文稿写作效率,还可以在改进方式方法等方面想办法、下功夫。一是分工协作。我们通常根据文稿的难易、急缓程度,采取“一人牵头,全体参与;一人牵头,一人配合”等方式起草。比如,撰写年度工作会议主题报告等大型材料时,一般都会成立写作班子,把几个能写材料的人集中起来,由一人牵头,其他同志配合,各写一块,再统稿,以提高效率。二是限时完成。有时候,文稿写作效率低,主要是因为起草者时间观念不强,没有紧迫感,拖一时算一时,以致耗时长。而实行限时制,要求起草者坚持“准时、优质、高效、负责”的原则,按照规定的时间、程序和要求起草文稿,有助于提高写作效率。三是同步推进。从拿出初稿到正式使用,其中还有完善数据、征求意见、呈送领导、校对印制等诸多流程。这些环节如果衔接不好,也会拖延时间。为提高效率,有些环节的工作可以同步推进、交叉进行。四是改善环境。文稿工作既劳心又劳力,文稿起草者的工作环境直接影响着工作效率。因此,要建立有效的激励机制,鼓励工作人员勤学苦练,多出精品,条件成熟的应优先提拔重用,让能力强、贡献大的笔杆子脱颖而出,担当重任。要改善硬件设施,为文稿起草者提供清净舒适的办公场所,减少岁末年初迎来送往等活动,避免外界干扰影响写作、影响效率。

gouzhiyong 发表于 2019-4-3 18:32:36

十五、抄送机关标识中的常见错误
      1、使用已废除了的“抄报”或“报”、“送”、“发”
      2、抄送个人公文不能抄送个人,需要送某位领导阅否由收文机关秘书部门决定。% B/ Y) o, w% A9 B0 {7 J/ W2 a4 T
      3、抄送主送机关既然是主送机关就不必再抄送了。- j8 w: W- V# f5 ~3 x( G* Y2 W
      4、滥抄滥送将向上级机关的“请示”同时抄送平级机关或下级机关;将公文抄送给与公文内容无关的机关。# _/ N7 {0 ?# ]3 w' p) l
      5、标识不规范抄送机关未分类或标点符号使用不当。* p, f# u5 B* u
      十六、公文处理的误区
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