老耿为你点评：配图诗与时评
本帖最后由 长安老耿 于 2014-9-24 11:03 编辑 <br /><br /><span style="background-color: white;">老耿为你点评：配图诗与时评<br><br></span><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;">学员朋友们：</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 晚上好。我是长安老耿，今晚我值班。“老耿为你点评”，上一讲讲了《怎样写时评》，今天结合点评262号学员“归零笔杆”的文章《刺刀见红才是真批评》，再谈怎样写时评。 <wbr></font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> 这一讲，讲三个内容：</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> 一、配图诗与时评</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> 二、例谈时评的审题与构思</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> 三、时评的谋篇布局</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr></font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> 在正式点评之前，我们先热一热场子，烘托一下气氛。</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr></font></b></p><p align="center" style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;">一、配图诗与时评</font></b></p><p align="center" style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><span style="background-color: white;"> <wbr></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> 先给朋友们发个美女，养养眼：</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; 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font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> 再发一首小诗，养养心：</font></b></p><p align="center" style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;">墨镜</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr></b><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr></b> <b>幸亏</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; 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list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 这个美女与小诗的组合，叫“诗配画”，或“配图诗”。</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr></font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 8</b><b>月1日</b><b>早上，我在老秘网上闲逛，突然，眼前一亮，瞄见了这位美女，不知为什么，心里一动，就赶紧拿起笔来，写下了这首小诗《墨镜》。随即发在“长安老耿”----我的新浪博客、老秘网个人空间上。又拿到学院群里“显摆”。不料，引起少男少女们一阵热议。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 现在，请朋友们当评委，为这首配图诗，打个分。</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 邀请万里助理当评委主任兼记分员。评委主任只记分，不打分。</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 规则是：</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 1</b><b>、百分制。在90分</b><b>—</b><b>100</b><b>分之间打分。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 2</b><b>、去掉一个最高分，去掉一个最低分。算出一个平均分。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><span style="background-color: white;"> <wbr></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 现在，请评委打分。……</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 请评委主任万里计算平均分………</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 请评委主任万里公布平均分：</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr></b> <b>“配图诗”平均分为：97.17</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><span style="background-color: white;"> <wbr></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 其实，老耿刚才不过是“抛砖引玉”罢了。</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 现在，老耿隆重的把“玉”“引”出来了：</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr></font></b></p><p align="center" style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;">回忆</font></b></p><p align="center" style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><span style="background-color: white;"> <wbr></span></p><p align="center" style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b>(262-</b><b>归零笔杆)</b></font></font></p><p align="center" style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><span style="background-color: white;"> <wbr></span></p><p align="center" style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;">从旧时光走来<br>我们带着慢慢的回忆<br>甜美与苦涩<br>早已失去当年的滋味<br>取一勺细细品味<br>如那清水的回忆<br><br>无论是笑着走过<br>亦或是哭着醒来<br>都如那淡淡云烟<br>消散在天空的胸怀</font></b></p><p align="center" style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;">一天一天<br>日子轻轻流逝<br>我们的故事<br>也会在那泛黄的日历本上<br>点点珍藏<br>成为回忆<br><br></font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 开场之时，我就说过今晚，我将点评</b><b>262</b><b>号学员“归零笔杆”的文章《刺刀见红才是真批评》。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 在点评文章之前，先请朋友们为“归零笔杆”的这首情诗《</b><b>回忆</b><b>》打分。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 规则依然是：</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 1</b><b>、百分制。在90分</b><b>—</b><b>100</b><b>分之间打分。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 2</b><b>、去掉一个最高分，去掉一个最低分。算出一个平均分。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><span style="background-color: white;"> <wbr></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 现在，请评委打分。……</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 请评委主任万里计算平均分</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 请评委主任万里公布平均分：</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 情诗《回忆》的平均分为：97.85</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr></font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 长安老耿与归零笔杆的PK结果出来了：</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 第一名：归零笔杆的《回忆》！</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 第二名：长安老耿的《墨镜》！</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 小游戏就到这里。</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><span style="background-color: white;"> <wbr></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 现在，老耿讲一讲，为什么要做这个游戏？这个游戏和今晚讲课的主题“时评”有什么关系呢？</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 我用8.1在群里的几句话来回答：</font></b></p><p align="left" style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; "><b style="background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 刚才老秘网看到这个女儿家，心里一动，信手写下。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><span style="background-color: white;"><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; "><b> <wbr> <wbr> “配图诗”的图，是诗的“由头”；</b></font></font><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; ">新闻事件等时事，是“时评”的由头。</font></b></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; "><b style="background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 配图诗，因“图”而起，而写；时评，因“时”而起，而评。</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr></font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 现在，我开始点评</b><b>“归零笔杆”的文章：《刺刀见红才是</b></font></font></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;">真批评》。</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><span style="background-color: white;"> <wbr></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr>(待续：二、例谈时评的审题与构思)</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><span style="background-color: white;"> <wbr></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><b><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 长安老耿</font></b></p><p style="margin-bottom: 5px; border: 0px; list-style: none; word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 20.869565963745117px; color: rgb(73, 73, 73); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', 'Helvetica Neue', SimSun; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; font-family: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; "><font style="word-wrap: normal; word-break: normal; line-height: 32.173912048339844px; font-size: 22px; background-color: white;"><b> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 2014.8.7</b><b>于长安茅庐</b></font></font></p> @老耿你在群里看美 女，美 女在群里看你。墨镜掩饰了你的笑容，笑容穿透了你的墨镜。 老猫 发表于 2014-8-12 14:50@老耿你在群里看美 女，美 女在群里看你。墨镜掩饰了你的笑容，笑容穿透了你的墨镜。
老猫，你点评得太到位了。你能否把这段话，发到我新浪博客这篇文章的“评论”里去。要注明“老秘网老猫”噢。 时间，真快，这个讲座快一年了。
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